The Color Of His Energy

This is what I see when I look into his eyes.

  The color of his energy
As blue as the oceans crystals.
Singing to the seagulls caws.
Shooting out peace like pistols.

The color of his energy
Is as green as the grass
Growing the seeds of flowers
Calling to the sun, seeking to surpass.

The color of his energy
Is the bright red of rosey lips
Puckering up to amount to
The worlds greatest kiss.

The color of his energy
Is as white as the heavens
way above the floating clouds
Taking him safely to his havens.

The color of his energy
Brings me closer to him everyday
Gripping my beating heart
Giving me every reason to stay.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

he shines to me..i see him as
as the oceans blue..seaguls singing
as deep green as grass ..i see flowers blossoming
calling for the sun..
i see him as bright red lips
giving me the greatest kiss
i see him white as the high heaven
high above clouds..he flies me high
the color of his energy is so bright ..just will not let me go
he colors my life..my life nothing without him.
just wonderful

[The Chimera]

I'm really impressed. Not only do I love the way you wrote this, I love the way you worded things and how you described them. I agree with Adelia, very romantic. :)

[Adelia Alighieri]

Thoroughly romantic and exquisite....lovely piece!