My Life

I feel my life's a cd on repeat everyday

do you even listen to what I have to say

how did we end up this way

I thought it'd get better if i'd stay

stupid to fall for this again

I've got so f*****g sick of this

but still I stick with this

It's ridiculous

tired of arguments over just the simplest

and i'm not sure how much more I can take

before I inevitably break

you'd think I would've learned from my previous mistakes

then maybe I wouldn't be in this hell hole that i'm in

I just can't win

I strive so hard to be the best

so I can give you nothing less than perfectness

but you've ripped my heart out

threw it away

is that how you play

I don't even know what to even say

I swear it was just today

you said you loved me then mistreat me

it seems you just avoid how I feel completely

why am I always put through constant problems and stress

why does my life have to be such a mess

if anyone out there feels what i'm going through

I hope one day you will find someone true

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

This is nice. I like the ending. But I feel your poems have been more heartfelt than this. Well this is emotional, but it doesn't feel as piercing as your work normally does. But hey, that's just my opinion.