Why..?

Why

Why does this happen

Things change drastically in life

But Why

I know its for the better

But there's still tears in my eyes

I feel like I'm sufficating because is coming so fast

Why

Why does this happen

I know its for the better

But as it nears, its lies become real

Why

I feel a pain in my heart

Like I am dying

But I might as well be

With all the things I'm leaving behind

Why

 

Reviews

[613]

This is a very deep, emotional poem, including many questions I feel we all ask at one time or another.

One comment of criticism: "dieing" should be "dying".

Nice work!

- Brittney

[Kay]

Thank You! Your criticism helps a lot

[613]

You're welcome. I look forward to reading more from you!

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This is so sad. Brought a tear to my eyes. Great poem

[Kay]

Thank you so much :)

[Izabe143]

Is this about you moving?

[Kay]

Yeah it is =/ ... was it good though?

[Izabe143]

It really get the touch of the feeling. It shows how your hurt inside because you have to leaved your loved friends behind. Like me

[Kay]

thanks, i kinda just wanna leave know so i dont have to go through that pain of the last day but of course i still want to be there, just so confusing

[Izabe143]

I know. I just can't believe your leaving...

[Kay]

i know, me neither but everything has been finalized =/

[Kay]

i wish i didnt though

[Kay]

but sometimes sacrifises are made for better lives

[Izabe143]

Well at least I'll be able to cry on your shoulder about Ethan for a month

[Kay]

yep, but even when im away i will always be there for you and you can cry on my virtual shoulder

[Izabe143]

Ha ha! So what r u getting Nathan for Valentines day?

[Kay]

I dont know =/... i had one little idea but idk..

[Izabe143]

Well better think quick it's only a month away. Is ASB gonna have the v day Dance? Cause the rec dance is on V day

[Kay]

idk, havent heard anything yet and my idea was, nathan was upset that he didnt get to dance with me so im gunna dance with him on v-day and maybe write a poem on a card too

[Izabe143]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!! I'm gonna give Ethan a card that I bought on sale last year. LOL

[Kay]

lol=).. you should write him a poem too since ur so good at them

[Izabe143]

No. I can do that... I have to feel the feelings let the pain,sadness, happiness, or excitement to be able to do that

[Kay]

ok... you just whateves then, its ur bf not mine

[Izabe143]

Kk. We'll see then I might

[Izabe143]

Lol those times before you left. And my boyfriend was the one named ethan

[Kay]

haha, well i guess ethans just make good boyfriends then lol

[Izabe143]

Uh mine was crappy remember

[Kay]

Well it wasn't crappy at first

[Izabe143]

At first…it's always the beginning you love the most