Observant

“You are one big beautiful mess 

that causes anyone who crosses your path ,

to get a little dirty.
The kind of heart-clenching, toxic dirt that can’t be washed with soap... 

or apologies. 

Causing lighted life’s to become lifeless and beating hearts to become numb.
You are a foolishly beautiful, blinding, outbreak of a mess.”

Author's Note

i've observed a beautiful human hurt woman in the most ugliest ways.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. You said a lot in so few words.
"Causing lighted life’s to become lifeless and beating hearts to become numb.
You are a foolishly beautiful, blinding, outbreak of a mess.”
The above lines told a complete story. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[John Byrd]

This poem is beautiful. You are really good. I definitely have observed someone like this before. You couldn't have said it any better :)

[krystle]

Just realized I never replied to the comments on this piece...thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

A strong poem that convines with honesty and clear imagery ; fine job.

[krystle]

just getting around and realized i never replied to the comments on this piece...thank you!

[Briana O'Connor]

Such powerful words in this piece, something we all can relate to.
Causing lighted life’s to become lifeless and beating hearts to become numb.- This line left me breathless. It was so beautiful, so heart wrenching, so perfectly worded and placed. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed the read.

[krystle]

just getting around to replying to these, thank you so much!

[kaptankev]

What's with the quotation marks?

[krystle]

On my other blog, it automatically puts quotation marks around my pieces since it is original. so i copied and pasted it from there and forgot to remove the marks