upside down

scary what "love" can do to a person

I should feel angry for the hole you put in my wall..

but i'm angrier at my mother covering it with a picture frame.

I shouldn't miss the hurtful words you constantly threw at me..

but I find myself missing them more with each silent second that passes.

I should enjoy my favorite romance movie..

but it isn't as enjoyable now without you here to scoff at every scene.

I shouldn't miss you, and the mess that you are..

But I find cleanliness boring nowadays. 

Reviews

[Nessie_AJ]

So true! Truly captures how one person can change everything! Love the last line!

[WhiteWillow]

Sometimes bad attention is good attention...as long as its there. Nicely written

[krystle]

thank you!

[J Johnson III]

Last line = the best line. Good write, I enjoyed it.

[krystle]

thank you i'm glad you liked it

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we want what we don't need. I do understand the poem. Most of us want to dance on dangerous waters and ground. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[krystle]

Yep well said, thank you for your review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem was very good and you are welcome.

[Sanjh]

LOVE, it can make you fly high in the skies but when you crash down from those heights, the pain is unbearable.
Nicely penned, thanks for sharing...:)

[krystle]

And sometimes people get addicted to that pain...it's a crazy love story, thank you so much!

[Sanjh]

yeah, right. Stories on true love are always crazy...
you are welcome...:)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Part of life where even wrong seems so right. well expressed.

[krystle]

Nicely said, thank you!

[ksscampos]

Sometimes we need to ask ourselves if it really is worth the pain? A wise man once said, the ones whom are worth your tears, will never make you shed them.... (or something like that)

[krystle]

And too many times people get addicted to be pain...it is a very crazy love story.

[Leslie Philibert]

A subtle, well written poem about relationships...

[krystle]

Thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

Uh oh! Someone's heading back down the road with a bad boy…

[krystle]

Hahhaa I very much look forward to your comments

[MomzillaNC]

You do seem to elicit something rather offhand from me, don't you!? :D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

true story!!!
it's really a mystery........why do we miss the things that annoys us the most? Do we like being annoyed or what......

"I should feel angry for the hole you put in my wall..
but i'm angrier at my mother covering it with a picture frame.
I shouldn't miss the hurtful words you constantly threw at me.."

beautifully written......
i loved it....!!!
:)

[krystle]

more as why do we miss the things/people who are toxic to us! thank you so much :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yes i missed that......the real mystery actually is: Why?
you are welcome.................:) :)