Dangerous mystery

He was a mystery waiting to be solved
And she ignored the warning signs

That's the danger in having a fascinated soul,
One thing ignites the fire inside of you

And you lose all control of wanting to know more

Reviews

[Chuba kichu]

Very true. Short but it explains all. Nice piece.

[ANTO]

Sounds like a bit of an addiction this 'He' - can't get enough -

I enjoyed this - its brief but not lacking at all, I feel I know the writer now and her object of affection and the situ, all in five lines of exquisite writing - well penned.

[krystle]

maybe it is maybe it isn't I haven't decided yet. thank you so much!

[SmittyJas]

great Insight on this short write. Many people are mysterious and could be a little creepy at time getting to know a stranger and making new friends is risky business. best of luck trust your heart. Use your head be safe. Love Always Jesus.

[krystle]

hahha "a little creepy" thank you for your review!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told the truth. Mystery is a great temptation. When someone or something take our attention. We are done. Good title and amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[krystle]

yes exactly, thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

Intriguing beginning.

NOTES: Feels like there should be more.

[krystle]

that's the point of this lol a simple short piece, but duly noted thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Good write, a fragment that is enigmatic with style...

[krystle]

thank you!

[Saddam]

Haa... that's right. very to the point one dear. lovely.

[krystle]

Thank you!