An Ode to Solitude

An Ode to Solitude

A Poem by mikayla baldwin
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☼ happy sunday ☼

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Loneliness
Or should i claim it 
Solitude?
What some consider their hugest fear
is my cup of coffee 
on a Sunday morning,
You let me blossom
Fertilize my mind and water my soul 
Hair undone, wearing an old t shirt 
A humble woman with curly hair
Who serenades secrets of decades past
Caffeine in my veins, songs in my heart
You console me as i wail
I close my eyes as you approach me with open arms
Embellished in your warmth and understanding
embracing me like no other
I tell you everything with certitude
because i trust you
every Sunday morning

© 2014 mikayla baldwin


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I followed the thought-flow... liked what I heard and understood the tones within.

shirt was a given if tee was the t

I felt what you were saying by the how it was being said

sometimes we don't have to use so many words just because we already KNOW they are in there ...don't we?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hi Author,
I have read your poem, and I really liked it. You have defined each character very well, and you have kept your work in such a way that it stands out. You could become an even better writer by continuing in this direction. It would be an honor for me if I could work with you as well. I am a commission artist, and I have worked on a lot of character art and book covers. If you think it's a good fit, I would love to create something for you as well.
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Posted 5 Months Ago


Wonderful :) I enjoy solitude as well. It's my cup of coffee, as you say :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


mikayla baldwin

11 Years Ago

thank you so much ♡
Pretty sweet piece here, and definitely one that can be related to behind the metaphors. Good job. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


mikayla baldwin

11 Years Ago

thank you :-)
really gud..i like the poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I followed the thought-flow... liked what I heard and understood the tones within.

shirt was a given if tee was the t

I felt what you were saying by the how it was being said

sometimes we don't have to use so many words just because we already KNOW they are in there ...don't we?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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mikayla baldwin
mikayla baldwin

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have been writing my whole conscious life this acct has poems from years ago back when i first started and now im finding myself thinking in color again. whether it’s good or bad im glad to be.. more..