Wondering Memories

I feel the cold air of a chilly summer night falling into place.

The droplets from a small summer shower hit the ground with heaviness and fear.

I wonder about the life I have been given has it been treated properly or played like a game of cards.

Looking back on the memories I made I smile but I want to cry at once.

Such precious moments of the things I cherish disappear as has the beauty in a broken soul.

The love remains but a piece will always be missing.

Once given can never be returned.

Author's Note

Still new at this stuff so please give reviews.

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

chilly summer nights
drifting droplets like
a lovely shower
on my soft limbs

life being treated
a game of cards
looking back i smiled
over broken beauty

love remains there
ever though missing
the precious
and cherished moments
-Karistina

Nice poem I have just edited your message I got from...

[prince]

I read it 3 tyms still didnt feel it old. Nice work

[Kristina]

Thank you!

[MichaelsLyric.com]

This is a beautiful way to describe emotions, thoughts by using nature's elements. Enjoyed it, thank you.

[Kristina]

Thank you!!

[Neon]

I enjoyed this piece. I think you do love snow-flakes .. and it's even a very cool thing about an angel ..
Cos, everybody loves seeing someone as beautiful as you dancing onto the floor of snows and say 'COLD AIR' ... You do write from your scented heart. Keep writing, Your cool.

[Kristina]

Thank you!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Lovely feelings expressed in a fine manner....
I reall too enjoyed the small piece of poetic bunch...
Thanks..keep writing...

[Kristina]

Thank you!

[Wolfwind]

I don't think there is anything you could improve on a piece like this. It's a flow of emotional musing and takes us into those times of heart ache and frustration that we all face when relationships go south. I like the way you layed this out. It's like all of it came within the intake of a breath that is held for just a moment and then subsided in a sigh... and a release of that breath.

Thank for sharing your ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Kristina]

Thank you!