Lifes Ways

                        

I see a tree in a field in my dreams. It is so peaceful and small breeze resides in the air.
The grass sways with the wind.
The sky so blue like the clear ocean water.
I listen to the leaves tremble. A small chill runs across my spine.
I remember this place at once.
The man that taught me important values in life was laid under this tree.
I wonder how such a beautiful place can hold the most painful memory.
As if the beauty was trying to hide the pain.
Then I realize in the pain resides the beauty of life deep with in our souls.

Reviews

[Neon]

Ahh.. now you touched mah heart throughout the whole poem .. by the words. Very nice and so smoothly penned write. This's much realistic poem and i love how you magnificently created the outlines with the great flow of yours. Nice work. Your running very successfully with yer this writing talent and If you run with your this talent for long and don't give up .. am sure you'll be touching the sky very soon.

May you get success at every step.
Keep on!

[Kristina]

Thank you so much. I wish you success with your amazing work as well!!

[Wolfwind]

I think I just stumbled across one of the most beautiful and well writen wisdoms. I believe as well that it is woven within the pain of life's experiences the true power to understand our highest joys. It is that contrast that is needed for us to appreciate the beauty and the happiness that drifts in on the breeze or is gazed at across an open horizon.

You crafted an amazing piece of poetry here. The image you've used with it helps contour the energy into creating a peaceful and deep resonance within the soul.

Two thumbs up! Great Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Kristina]

Thank you so much for the review!