Dancing Snow

Unfinished poem.

I watch the snow flake above the mountain pine trees dancing.

They spin and twirl with the utmost elegance. 

I consume myself in the moment.

Eyes closed, I see you.

You move like the dancing snow flakes.

This rush of deep desire for you awakens.

Reviews

[ron]

This rush of deep desire for you awakens.

It has awakened in your words as well.

[A]

Nature inspires so much, and contemplating it helps us understand our own nature.This poem is really beautiful!

[Kristina]

Nature is very helpful on so many levels. Thank you.

[A]

You're welcome! :)

[Neon]

Nice poem and I love watching someone as beautiful as you feel cool and 'Dancing' ... on the floors of snow flakes. Keep on!

[Kristina]

Thanks for the awesome review!

[Sami Khalil]

I do like to watch that too...A splendid poem....:).........................

[Kristina]

Thank you!! It is defienetly a beautiful sight!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Ahhh!!! Passionate work..Sara

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................