Smoke

Smoke fills this room.

Lit another cigarette.

Thoughts spin.

Heart has fallen deep.

Lost in its own hell.

Take another drag.

The mind has lost.

It's left to weep.

You are on my mind.

Another night of no sleep.

Smoke fills this room.

Lit another cigarette.

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

A night of thought without conclusion, never ending how's and why's, running too quickly together to leave space for answers. I know this feeling well. smoking, sleepless, unending night. I really enjoyed your words, thank you for sharing.

[Kristina]

Thank you again! It is a pleasure to share thoughts with others who have similar experiences.

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.

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it remains me my moment when i was broke down. very well write i feel in.

[Kristina]

It was one of those days. Thank you for the review!

[Melaniespace]

i like this and I can totally relate. I like that it leaves me with more to think about. like who do you miss and why.

[Kristina]

I had missed someone I really care about. Timing seems never right between us.