One Night Stand

My Idea of a One Night Stand

One Night Stand is all it was

One wonderful night of bliss

 

You said you would never leave

But when i woke you were gone

 

One would think that i wouldnt

be affected this much.... But i am

 

All i can dream about is you

All i can think about is you

 

I still feel your hands on my body

I still feel your breath on my skin

 

I know i seem obsessed

Its true.. I might be

 

But all i can think of is that night

Of all that we shared

 

One Night Stand is all it was

One wonderful night of bliss

 

Author's Note

I have NEVER had a one night stand in my life just so you know and i never will. This is what it would be like to me if i really cared for the guy but never saw him again .

Reviews

[dovetailer]

it takes a special person to be so intimate and not feel some connection...never it touch the tender side of us...
I am like you in that regard...I need a connection...I love to savor the scenery instead of focusing on the destination and then the door...
the more you make the trip, the more familiar you become with the terrain...
there are just too many wonderful feelings to not want to feel them again...like tomorrow, perhaps...lol
you did well to capture the feelings for not ever having "been there...done that..."
Good write...

[vincentbals]

I like the poem. It's deep. Great job!!

[DamienHino]

very nice poem (creative and great flow)...hmm someone should write one from a guys perspective.

[r]

Wow, this is amazing, what i could imagine someone would feel after one, depending of course. i love it, especially the second couplet.

"You said you would never leave
But when i woke you were gone"

Lying seems to be a normal thing, wanting more than you can have is another, and how awesome your writing is yet seems to be one more! Haha.

But yeah, love it, and it's amazing. :)

[x]

I guess one night stands are in the head of the beholder.
Perhaps it is just a physical thing..perhaps one or the other hopes it will go onto other more meaningful things. I don't know. They can be cruel and I don't think they are a good idea. You gathered the essence of what they are all about, very well here.

[FlawedByDesign]

On the surface, this tells of some very basic feelings, if you don't mind me saying. You mention how you have never had a one night stand (neither have I), but I think you can go much much deeper than you have with feelings of longing/wanting more afterward and the tactile nature of the night.

Good effort.

[KaySea]

very romantic. i loved it

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Just shows you are a deep romantic... one night is all it takes to fall... nicely done.

[Robin]

I remember playing clubs , and watching different men and women leave with different women and men every night , sex for sex , no feeling, no connection - no love ,
reading your poem, I wonder how many may have had the feeling you describe ...