One Blissful Night

This is a one night stand from a guys POV

You say I dont care

because I leave when your asleep

 

What you dont realize is ...

I'm afraid

 

Yes, it was one wonderful night of bliss

Yes, it was a One Night Stand

 

I dont want to commit

I dont want you....

 

I still hear your voice as you cry out

I still feel the sting of your nails

 

I know this might be obsessive

But I dont care

 

All I cant think of is that One Blissful Night

That wonderful night of paradise

 

I got to find you...

I got to have you...

 

I want to have more than that one night

I want more than that One Blissful Night

 

 

Author's Note

I tried to write this from a guys point of view.. I dont know how well it turned out. I drew inspiration for this from my fiance'. It would have been easier to write if i knew somebody who actually had a one night stand, but this is what i think my fiance would do if he ever did have a one night stand.

Reviews

[D.Truelove]

Interesting read. Cross gender writing can be tricky. I think many guys would be able to relate to this, though many more view the whole thing as a game. This makes them comparable to predators looking for a fresh meal, and a lot of them like it that way. But now I'm rambling and not staying on topic, so back to my point. From the point of view of this guy, I can understand the line

What you don't realize is ...
I'm afraid

The only thing I would of done different is maybe explore that fear a little more, what's he afraid of more specifically? Why doesn't he want to commit? But I maybe alone in thinking that. Any way, as I said before, it was a good piece and I enjoyed reading it.

[x]

Don't know why but this write gave me the shivers...in a good way.
I think it is the need you managed to capture here. To feel need for another is something that dwells within us somewhere between the senses of erotic and loving..it's like that instant 'bang' (pardon the pun) when with someone that rocks your world in a mysterious way.
You wrote something quite interesting here and I really enjoyed it..thanks for posting.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love can be scary and cause us to make many mistakes, like running from it... a great step into the man's psyche.

[Robin]

ooh that is battle going on there , a cake and eat it too thing , I think you did pretty good for not ever having a one night stand and being female .

[Moonflower]

I think you did very well. :) i really liked it.

[sammyj]

wow, very thought provoking

[Brad]

no...i think you nailed it

[r]

I like this, i personally think you wrote it well, it's simple and it shows the emotions without really delving into them. some guys are actually like this and actually feel like this, and it appears as if the guy wasnt one who went around doing that a lot, because otherwise he probably wouldnt care.

I love the last stanza, but "blissfull" should be "blissful".

:)

[DamienHino]

"I got to find you...
I got to have you..." ohhh i love this line strong lust desires i got to have you...ahhh really like it.
"But all i can think about is you" honestly a guy in my opinion wouldn't be so emotionally involved if he went around having one night stands. There is less need to be emotionally connected when having sex and after. And it brings your spirits and confidence up as a male.