I wrote this for a friend I who died one year ago today from a staph infection... We All Miss You Casey. Also for the last line, He was a star football player, and football was the town's life, since it was a small town where we come from.
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A beautiful and sad poem. It scare when young people die of things like staph infection. It make me feel afraid for my children. You brought back to life a good man. We need to remember those who made us happy in our life. A excellent poem.
Coyote
We have all lost loved one's, losing a friend is really hard to take and this poem to him is lovely. Most find it hard to release things from the heart to the world, I find them very meaningful and releasing. There is only one correction I can point out, line 8 "Turning", just thought I would let you know so it's flow would be complete. Anyway, lovely write.
I think the last line puts on a damper on the otherwise sheer timelessness of this writing... it's a great poem and tribute to your friend regardless, but football? Really? Won't he forever live on in the heart of friends and family or even his community?
I'm Katie, i'm 18, and a senior in high school. I'm also happily engaged to my bf of two years. I love writing poetry, and i'm currently working on my book "Fall From Time", the prologue is posted rig.. more..