And She Loved

Second attempt...

Eyes upturned to his

Never blinking

Never ceasing

To wander further into the labyrinth

That was his soul

 

A hideous creature

Ravenous, rotting flesh caught between

His razor-like teeth

 

A visage of hell

And yet,

 

Staring into those eyes

That had ripped her being from within

And devoured it

A vulture tearing apart a dove

 

Never blinking

Never ceasing

Reviews

[The Purple Kazoo]

that's really awesome. i like the way the title isn't actually a line from the poem, more like part of it than anything else. **hugs**

[~The Queen~]

Very well done! For someone who's new, that's a very good piece. I liked it! Looking forward to reading more of your work.

-The Queen

[No More]

Wow, a very deep poem wonderfully written. Good stuff! Is this about leaving an abusive person? What inspired this? I know the "vulture tearing apart a dove" all too well.