Our Moon

Taken for granted.

                                            Our

                                moon

                           shines bright

                        reflecting

                      light

                    shone from

                   the sun

                  for it

                  makes none.

                  Some will

                   at last

                     know that

                      the blast

                        was not

                           the way

                               our moon

                                    was 

                                           made.

Reviews

[Kelsey]

Thanks, guys! I wish I could take credit for the shape idea, but one of my teachers actually suggested it a few years ago.

[AndyJCash]

A beautiful structure, very intriguing and pleasant to the eye :) Like how you've incorporated your believes into the end despite not agreeing with you :)

[solitare]

How clever are you! Wonderful structure into the crescent mooon - delightful :)