Is this wrong?

It's funny how this worked out,

I met you,

You smiled and said hello,

Your best friend was once mine,

Then he walked away,

Surprise,

Surprise,

You were there when no one else was,

To listen to my every word,

Even when it was late at night,

You gave me comfort,

I can't help it,

I think I have fallen once again,

Is this wrong?

Should I be ashamed of how I feel?

I’m scared if I follow through,

And kiss you,

I will ruin something worth living for,

You say I won’t,

And that you don’t care what everyone else thinks,

I hope that my decision won’t come around again,

And backstab me.

 

Author's Note

just a poem now...dosnt mean muchhh. what do you think?

Reviews

[Sandra K]

This always happens, let me tell you. i worry about making the wrong mover everytime. I dunno what he is thinking or not. When i ask for communication i dont get it. I know who you feel. What is wrong or what is right in this part of the relationship doesnt matter. How i would judge it, is by the value of the person. I like this guy. We dated for 6 weeks, and he felt he was being tied down. I was hurt and lost. He knows his mistakes, and the sitution we are in right now, we are really not allowed ot talk. But we keep it to ourselves. We are both lost. But we take it a step at a time, day by day. I try to become a bette partner in each relationship i am in. I hope this helps! Great poem!!

Sandra K!

[Travis Lawrence]

Well, in my experience, relationships were meant to get fucked over. But, they seem to work out for some people, right? Do what will make you happy, is my advice, and try your best to not regret your decision.

[John Stussy]

take your time with it, make sure Jarad and you will work out before you do anything, but still keep him interested.

[Pinky]

I think the poem is good. As for the relationship part and getting fucked over... get used to it... and i wud say go for it...what do u have to lose compared to what u have to gain?