Floridaa :D

 Walking along the oceans sandy beach,

Letting the cool water,

Sweep across the tops of my burnt feet,

The sensation of the warm strokes of heat,

Glides along my every curve,

My hair wildly moves with the breeze,

As I sink into every step,

I leave a print,

Soon enough it's washed away,

By the strong waves,

Pounding on the shore,

Seagull's over head,

And the fish in the sea.

 

Author's Note

gosh what i would do to just have a few more days there :) what do you think?

Reviews

[Sandra K]

I really like this poem!
It not about love!

lol

Sandra K

[Poeticpiers]

A descriptive piece of poetic prose evoking srong visuals. I could do with aweeek or so of sunshine myself

[Albert Freeman]

Now that paints a vivid image of walking upon the beach basking in the sun and breeze. Nice poem. Makes me want to pickup and take a road trip to those beaches.