Desire

This is a poem I wrote this week and I thought I would add this as my first piece on here as it fits my usual style of writing.

sometimes everything is a pulsing moment,
filling the night,
not yet woken into blinding sight,
not yet giving way to darkness.
as opposites fall into repulsion.
what can I do, as the world shrinks;
devouring the earth outside our closed doors.
how can it be so slowly simple?
our living death a masterpiece in four dimensions.
even the title is not our own,
desire unfulfilled

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Demetria.Ro$e.Hathaway]

wonderfull poem
Its filled with emotion
:) Amazing
Your Friend Demi

[Kia-chan!]

Holy crap! this poem is so awesome, it hurts! Nice job! I really like your detailed use of vocabulary :) All, in all, a very good read :)

[Mary]

wow,it kinda made my head spin a little, this is really good!!!

[Alana]

very nice :] i liked it. i could really feel the emotion that you were trying to betray. very very nice

[Katie L]

i love it