Some days I wish this was all done No more nightmares No more tears No more pain No more wishing you would stay
Laying on the grass I smell rain The thought of you crosses my mind The memory of that heartbreak in your smile As you went out into the snow It was so cold, so very cold You did it for me
A thousand of your memories flood into my mind Your arms around me The way you blushed Your loving eyes Your hand on mine The sound of your heartbeat The way you cried It weighs down on my lungs like a pile of bricks How did this happen?
Romeo and Juliet, was that about us? The Ugly Duckling, was that about me? Hamlet, was that about your heart? Yes, our feelings killed our love Yes, I was rejected Yes, every happiness your heart had died Is this goodbye?
Very strong thoughts and a emotional ride you took the reader with.
"Yes, every happiness your heart had died
Is this goodbye?"
I believe we can't forget. Just become less painful with time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Very strong thoughts and a emotional ride you took the reader with.
"Yes, every happiness your heart had died
Is this goodbye?"
I believe we can't forget. Just become less painful with time. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..