The Sea

Every time I look up at the stars,

It reminds me of the first time I looked into your stormy eyes

From then on I knew that I needed you in my life

Just like the sun needs the moon...

I have to catch my breath when I see you

Your personality is as extravagant as the sea

And I definitely want you to be with me

I just wish you could see...

How much you have saved me

Reviews

[xbxbzdvdsv]

Awesome poem, reminds me of someone.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I liked the use of the sea. The sea is free and wild. Good to find untamed places and I like the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyndy]

This poem is really beautiful and mesmerising! I love it very much.

[closed]

we all need a savior sometimes
it's great that we can immortalize those we care about in our writings
one of the best things about it

this was an amazing poem


-Dream

[Jamestown]

Well penned!.
Sweet sentiment, and lovely imagery:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!