On That Dark Night

Tonight I glanced outside at the moon
It reminded me of that night when we were looking up at the stars
I pointed to Orion...
And you just smiled
You smiled  because you didn't know
You didn't know how desperately I needed someone...
Anyone
On that dark night in January
You didn't know how much I was hurting
But you were willing to fix me

Reviews

[Astrid]

This is a lovely piece. It has depth to it :)

[Annie Gryphon]

it has something touching and evil. I would delete some words, there are a lot of repeatings, and then its like a knife in your hand. A strong piece of poetry, anyways.

[Stan Lee]

And you just smiled... I like that.
Looking up at the moon... you can understand why people worshiped it...
Peaceful poem... thanks for sharing

[SirMangosven]

How can they be willing to fix you if they don't know you're broken?