My Whole Life
A Poem by K.M
I just feel so aloneI feel so unwantedI feel like one big mess of a mistakeJust one solid mistakeI wish someone would understandAnd then I wish they could save me...From this hell that I call my life
© 2015 K.M
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alot of people can relate to this
if this is literal
you have friends around you, including me
don't give up on life
keep writing
your pen will save you
-Dream
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Years Ago
Well said Dream. This is a despairing write Kenzie. Hope it's not literal cz us and Randall Butternu.. read moreWell said Dream. This is a despairing write Kenzie. Hope it's not literal cz us and Randall Butternubs - we're your friends. :)
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Added on July 8, 2015
Last Updated on December 4, 2015
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K.MOK
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I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..
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