Sonnet 17

The backseats view wasn't bad at all

Those tear stained nights weren't wrong

Can't believe you didn't even call

I still am singing that song

Do you still remember that day?

The night the stars only saw us

I fell in love way back in may

Now you are riding the Ant bus

I hope this love will never fade

Don't turn to dated memories

My soul surely will start to degrade

Just remember the morning glories

Now you are so close, I can feel you're breath

And I pray that this will not be our death 

Reviews

[Bren]

You conveyed great emotion and intensity. What a sweet poem!

[AaronFreitas]

We always home love will never fade and sometimes we don't get a choice. :) I enjoyed your words Kenzie :)

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
I really liked it!!

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My heart start run fast. You words remains me all my loves. What we did together . How we feel when our wings was too storng. THANKS FOR THAT.

[Stan Lee]

Hey Kenzie, Great rhyming pattern. I loved "tear stained nights" excuse my ignorance though, what is an ant bus?

[K.M]

Oh, haha it's fine :) The Ant bus is the name of the bus that I ride to and from school :)