Grave Covered Grass

Deep in the ground...

Is where I am going to stay 

Because no one down there will tell me to go away

So just turn your back...

And walk away

While the grass covers

My forgotten grave

Reviews

[Bear]

Almost sounds like an epitaph, thou not your own, you are much too talented to not make mention of them :~) This is a great exercise in writing for not everyone can look at their own possible death with such an open mind, I like it. Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Kaliope]

Well, the poem itself has already received praise from others, and rightfully so, but personally I adore the title. I think the inversion is brilliant and poetic in its own right.

[Emily]

I love the ending!
Great poem!
Keep it up!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words and thoughts. I liked them. Thank you Kenzie for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Stan Lee]

you're right, no one down there will tell you to go away, but from what i believe no one will tell you anything down there.... This is a great poem Kenzie! :)

[A hare off]

I don't know whether to smile or frown. I would smile because it is so well written but frown because of the subject matter. Really good Kenzie.