Nice idea but way too underdeveloped. I see lots of these very short poems on this website & usually I just skip over them becuz there's really not enuf effort for me to bother putting out my own effort to review it properly. If you want "Awwwwe! How awesome!" then you need to find someone else, not me, to review your poems. Why not SHOW us instead of TELLING us . . . how does this happen, how does this feel, how does this smell, how does this sound . . . don't be lame & stop after two lines.
Nice idea but way too underdeveloped. I see lots of these very short poems on this website & usually I just skip over them becuz there's really not enuf effort for me to bother putting out my own effort to review it properly. If you want "Awwwwe! How awesome!" then you need to find someone else, not me, to review your poems. Why not SHOW us instead of TELLING us . . . how does this happen, how does this feel, how does this smell, how does this sound . . . don't be lame & stop after two lines.
I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..