Greenhouse

Greenhouse

A Poem by K.M

Today, you met me by the greenhouse
I wasn't sure if you'd really come
But you did...
And as we walked
I saw those guys sitting on top of their car
In lawn chairs
And I thought about how I was raised wild
Wishing I was tame
But I'm as wild as they come
And you are as free as the stars

© 2016 K.M


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This is a nice take on two different people being able to come together. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kenzie!

You know that I love everything you write, but this one was outstanding.
I love it and hope that you'll read my new poem also.

Sincerely
C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the vibrant freedom one feels reading your words. This dreamish moment awakens, and you find yourself so alive, so wild. A perfect moment in gardens of light. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 28, 2016
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I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..