Preston

A Poem by K.M

Tonight I went out and sat in a lawn chair

And while I sat there looking at the stars

I thought about you

I thought about what we used to be

And it hurt

Because I lost you

And you forgot about me

© 2016 K.M

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Jacob Clifford

Relatable. Good presentation and sense of scale with this poem. It shows what needs to be there without lagging on anything.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ReedWrite

Nice piece. Simple, yet poignant. The reader feels your pain and loss. You captured the voice you needed in just a few well-penned words. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 30, 2016
Last Updated on October 30, 2016

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I am trying to write my own poetry book... so I need some serious feedback (: All of my poems are about things that have happened to me or people in my life. I hope you guys like my poetry. more..