Spirit

each line is a poem.....can be mixed and matched like a twister poem....

so many birds to feed....

making it tough on me....

taking more than i can give...

making the rest of me free....

in command of my own ship...

best it be that i not slip....

to savor and honor the days, mine at hand....

blessed in the aura of his plan....

living in the ways of the land.....

Reviews

[Niko]

Wow... it's short, but I have to say I definitely like where you're going with it =D

If you read into the lines, there's definitely a lot to take from it there