I Wish I Could...

I wish I could be the part of your tears

So that I will see the saddest from your eyes

I wish I could be your heart

So that I will know how you feel 

I wish I could be your soul

So that I will always be inside you forever  

Author's Note

feel free to give critics, suggestions, or anything else :)

Reviews

[Dhes]

This is exactly what I'm feeling right now. Wow. A great piece of art.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the wish and the hope in the words. To be part of another life. A wish needing two people wanting the same things. Thank you Kevin for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kevin Gerardo]

Definitely right. This poem tells about someone who had already gone. He wished that he could be there again, but it was just only a hope.
Thank you for taking time to read this poem. Glad to see that you are into it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the poem and you are welcome.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Reading this reminded me of a song I'd heard a some years ago.. Seemed to me you had translated that into english(that song is in urdu)..but I liked reading this.. Simple and beautiful ☺

[Kevin Gerardo]

Oh, really? I never thought that before, but thank you anyway :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome☺