I Wrote Your Name...

Just an ordinary love poem

I wrote your name in the sky

But the wind blew it away

I wrote your name in the sand

But the waves washed it away

I wrote your name in my heart

That is where it will stay

Reviews

[KTizzle]

I like it. I feel like it really is short and sweet. I especially liked the ending where you have this cool comparison to the other stanzas. I feel like you could do more with the very last line where it says, that is where it will stay. Perhaps get rid of the that is, but it is good as is.

Thanks for posting! Have a great day!

[Kevin Gerardo]

Thank you for reviewing. I am so glad that you like it. For the last line, actually I have a lot of ideas, but I think it suits the most. If you have any idea or suggestion how the last line should be, you can share to me. I would be happy to see that. :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Soooo Lovelyyyyy .........

[Kevin Gerardo]

Thank you brother :)

[OhSnapShley]

Short and sweet, a cute read.

[Kevin Gerardo]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful. Perfect flow of thoughts leading to amazing ending. Love is never forgotten. Thank you Kevin for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kevin Gerardo]

Thank you for reviewing, Coyote! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Nice and simple but deep! I like the intensity here..

[Kevin Gerardo]

Thank you :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺