Remember...

Remember...

one day

the colorful day...

you left me alone.

hey...hey...h..ey

I tried in vain

because

The separation distance

is much larger

of my small hands....

What if I could sew it????

 

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Amazing write you crafted it very good.

[keyvan]

Thank you...

[Souladareatease]

This was a staggering write, so much emotion with few words...incredible!!!

[keyvan]

Thank you...

[emmajoy]

There's such a cleverness to those last words, wanting to sew distance tighter, closer .. the sadness is almost etched into the air, the memory and all. You write with great feeling.

[keyvan]

thank you

[Jack...]

very nice and to the point.

[keyvan]

thank you

[Scarlet Alice]

short but great. :)

[keyvan]

thank you:)

[Will]

Nicely written. Short, but packs a punch.

[keyvan]

tank you

[KurKota]

Good way of pointing out differences of perspectives... Thank you for sharing.

[keyvan]

thank you

[Marie]

Rather nice. I think the last line is what makes it.

[keyvan]

thank you

[Junert]

I don't get the last line.

[keyvan]

I editing it...I think it is be clear now.....thank for your attention..

[Junert]

Yeah, thanks too.

[AWickedMoon]

Nice poem.

[keyvan]

thank you:)