when you arrive

When you arrive

It was fall

You, me, fall...

Every where was yellow

When you arrive....

Trees..leafs... colors

And 

Our forgotten words

Were yellow

When...

No

When you arrive 

It was so late

We was drowned

In fake life harmony 

Hey...

my lost childhood

remember that

when you arrive..

we was.....

yellow..

Reviews

[Scarlet Alice]

I really like this one...

really simple and creative ^~^)

[keyvan]

Thank you so much.

[Scarlet Alice]

welcome ^~^)

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice job, Everywhere is one word. we were drowned, we were yellow, Fall needs capitals, so this needs a bit
of work, but a good poem

[Sami Khalil]

Our forgotten words
Was(were) yellow"

A splendid read and write...:)........

[keyvan]

Thank you...Thank you so much...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome....:).........