A Little Swing

on the spot (for him)

let's go

with the old classic 

the black and blue

 and red and white

look at me

i have my new dress on

it's flinging

swinging

ringing

i'm singing

as i swirl

and twirl

and whirl

fast paced

tapping shoes

the sound of the band playing in the background

let's go way too fast

until i get dizzy

let's go way too fast

moving our hips to a different century

let's take it back 

let's never take anything serious

don't make this short

i love you

let's keep dancing

even if it takes our breath away

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

I would suggest making the font just a tad smaller. Other than that as always a wonderful poem, great ideas, smooth flow. I love love poems, as one could so easily relate to the topic. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece and have a wonderful day.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

i `enojoy the consistency of this one and its charm