Times Of Our Past

on the spot

M E M O R I E S 

that we can live by

senses

overload

senses

and i smell my childhood

from across the ageing pond

i can see the wisps of thought

floating on the surface

words

echo

echo

echo

echo me my past

vibrate all we had

and take back

the times of our past

Reviews

[Shah Sabia]

Reminds me of the by gone days.
Good write :)

[Kay]

I like how you repeat the word echo to convey the powerful vibration and effect of the past. Nice job! :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Beautiful....has a clean freshness about it...well done!

[Amy R]

simple and beautiful :)
well done!

[rubie]

I love the line "smell my childhood" because smell is such a powerful sense that can conjure up very strong emotions. I think this is because it is one of the first sense newborns use to identify their mothers. It's deep, visceral and primal....just like this piece.

Nicely penned.