L O S T

on the spot

L O V E

a four letter question mark

L I F E

this celestial orb that has possessed our bodies

minds

and souls

where

can we

ever

find such an intellect

beings

upon beings

of brains

brainpower

use it

try to find me

coz you can't find me

and you won't

because right now you're thinking the worst

possible thing to happen to me 

because you can't find me

dear

friends

if even i 

cannot find myself

how on earth 

will you find me?

Reviews

[Shah Sabia]

Rhetoric questions make a good impact on the reader, well done.

[W R Stowe]

Good question but we should avoid withdrawing from our self and live life fully

[Sami Khalil]

"where
can we
ever
find such an intellect
beings
upon beings
of brains"

I like it and the questions it raises. Bravo...................

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

This piece is very mysterious....leaves the reader pondering it all.....nicely inked.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

this one is slightly confusing to me. is it a rap of sorts?