Change

on the spot; based on a dream

i did

the only thing

i could've

in this

world

i changed

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

Nothing stays the same like change; sometimes change is good sometimes it is bad. There are a number of factors that go into change that make it good or bad. This is yet another perfect example of less is more, imagery, and alliteration. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem and have a great day.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Change is the name of this game, called life.
People often forget this fundamental rule of living..
Thought provoking piece.

[Valentine]

Lets hope the change was for the better. In all of us there are parts that need to be changed. Valentine

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

short and sweet. streamlined for power. good job

[AaronFreitas]

Sometimes we have to take a hard look at ourselves and the only way to grow and be a better us is to change. Nice work :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

The only thing that's constant: Change.
beautiful..........!!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Amy R]

nice choice of words :)
yet so much meaning in the world.
well done!

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Wise words for this world....beautifully inked.