When Sleep Comes

on the spot

still in slumber

the trees' rustle

their leaves

as they lull me

with their soft

silent

song

of sleep

and i will conform

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

The idea of sleep is vividly conveyed here; I am on a countryside, in the middle of the afternoon about ready to take a snooze because the temperature is soft, there isn't a cloud in the sky the sun is shining and the trees are whispering softly to me in the warm breeze. Nature and body functions combined in the best possible way. Thanks for sharing and have a great day.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Your poem resonated with my idea of relaxation in nature's cradle.
I always felt calmness falling over me, when the trees murmer and the breeze brought to me it's lullaby.
This is inspiring me to write something..
Thank you for sharing! :)

[Valentine]

Nothing like the sounds of nature to lull you asleep. Nice write. Valentine

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

conform. bleep boop beep i am a robot. jk conform was just so out there in repects to the rest of the poems night wind nature vibe. nice

[Amy R]

quite a sweet little poem,
great job! :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Ahhh a beautiful lullaby.....love the title as well Khatoon!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
soft serene..........beautiful.......
i loved it!!!
:)