Weak Spot

on the spot; Lily

all my time

sitting on top

of the trees

swinging my feet

in the air

resonating

the sweet scent 

of the world

humming

a soft song

that's quickly fading

into the distance

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

life is what we make of it isn't it? I like to think it is anyway. This is a great example of less is more to convey the above mentioned ideas. The imagery is crisp and clear here, I can easily get the sensation of sitting in a tree all day humming and singing and not having a care in the world. Great poem, thanks for sharing this with me and have a great day.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Life's rich tapestry, is a subject to think about.
Thanks for sharing.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

the sweet scent...mi gusta! this will work! great job

[Amy R]

thanks for sharing !!!!!!!

[Amy R]

beautiful poem, and i think you meant "sitting on top" in line 2.

[FaeryQueen]

ya thanks!!

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

This is a poignant beautiful write!