Sparkle On!

on the spot

i can feel you

when you're near

and your love

is just as intoxicating

i yearn for you

but i guess

i'll learn to wait

Ha!

what?

waiting?

life is too short to wait

let's make the best mistake we're ever going to make

even if we end up dying

tomorrow

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A nice take at the anxious feelings of new infatuation and life.
Enjoyed it!

[Jen Walters]

This one could almost be considered the beginning of one of the best love stories I have read. This is such a well written, emotion filled poem. Great writing, thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.

[Shah Sabia]

Haha this one is too cute.
I smiled while reading this, thankyou for sharing :)

[Amy R]

hahah reminds me of those ancient love stories!
I agree to Jane!
thanks for sharing.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Wow a love as deep as Romeo and Juliet's!