Pictures On The Wall

on the spot

the memories

there

on my wall

try to tell me my story

but the echoes

have long gone

faded

into oblivion

as i walk by them now

i remotely remember

a life

i once lived

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

I feel like I have lived another life...one of misery and strife. It was difficult to be sure, but now I have to wonder if I didn't bring it all on myself. This new beautiful everlasting life I love, with my husband and our children. It's funny how life can be one thing one day and another thing the next. Thanks for sharing such a beautifully touching write, and have a wonderful day.

[FaeryQueen]

we live in the now, but time wants us to believe that. it's an illusion, we live in the past, present and future, all at once, so it may be possible.

[Shah Sabia]

Woah, beauty.
"I remotely remember a life,
I once lived".
The ending lines are perfectly linked.
Such a marvellous piece it is.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Love this piece.....memories seem so faded it sometimes seems as if a totally different person lived that life....yet it is one's own memory....nicely inked.

[FaeryQueen]

i was thinking about my current situation.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow. A Reverie described in brevity.
Loved this piece!