dawn in the city

gray soft glow

in the fertile sky

developing

developing

clouds

the sun

has almost come out

the rain will wash us anew

but if only the rain was pure

the rain will come

as the cars drive by

roads slicked with sleek shine

the birds

aroused

from their slumber

chirping

wake all!

the sun has cometh

Reviews

[Robert]

Nicely written Khatoon....
the sun has cometh.

[Jen Walters]

I feel energized with this poem, like I am waking from a fresh slumber, my mind at ease. Rain may not be pure chemically, but it certainly does freshen everything. I love this poem, its beautiful, a fast easy read. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write and have a great day.

[Valentine]

If only the rain was pure? It could be the angels crying. Valentine

[FaeryQueen]

Angels don't cry.

[Fatema]

this poem sounds peace full
" gray soft glow "

[Emily]

Love this one!
Keep it up!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Warm n refreshing imagery. Almost saw the orange sky turning blue n white and triggering the start of life's hustle bustles!