Dance on the Fabrication of Life

on the spot

small triumphs

big thoughts

tiny world

falseness

faded

atmospheres intoxicated

by cars

loud noise

silence is loud

a soft ting

brain waves

thought threads

dancing

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

A very existential piece. On the spot and in the moment. This is how "falseness faded". The apparent falseness of your existence becomes real and tangible. And you're there in all the hubbub, with brain waves dancing.

I thinker this very much.

Best regards,

Rick

[Valentine]

Falseness faded????? If only that were so. Valentine

[Sleeper Note]

I like this piece. The pacing and rhythm really match the mindset imparted by the poet. The 'quick-quick' movement of young life, the buzz of a city. Very exciting to the senses. Well done. Cheers!

[FaeryQueen]

woooooooooooooo! my love of poetry and my ability to share this is very rewarding. thank YOU