"Monotonous, Until You"

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"Monotonous, Until You"

I've been away, somewhere on a train. Speed up!

Slow down!

I've just come up for air, It feels juvenile to not come up for air, avoiding reality, as the way that I did cut me off.

 I've seen the light, somewhere in the darkness. 

So, Goodbye to the memories of my past. I don't like my drowning in my tears.

So, I'll stop.

Forget me, as I've forgotten you in every song I hear about us, the tears I've drowned myself in are starting to stale.

There'll be another one, and I'll love him, as I've loved you.

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

I really like your poem. "Goodbye to the memories of my past." Accepting and moving forward in search of new love.."There'll be another one" Well done.

[Valentine]

Very true, and as youth ages they find that shopping around, finding good qualities in each can be a very learning experience when shopping for a partner. Valentine