confidence

confidence

A Poem by I am renee

"my imperfections make me perfect no contradictions just predictions"
My confidence is powered by my insecurities keeps me moving forward only I can hold myself back
Insecurities vs confidence
I was insecure about my body "I felt like I was in a prison"
I hated myself and my body
And I was my own poison to myself as I went along with society "my weight is what killed me a little inside"
Self hate is poisonous until you love yourself "eventually I didn't care about society and what they thought"
People can be insecure about their body
Fighting their insecurities to seek confidence
My confidence was overpowering
I didn't care how fat or how skinny I was
"I was not gonna be a poison to myself"
I felt I was a prisoner in my own skin
So instead of crying, I'm smiling
People talked s**t about me
Made fun of me
"insecurities vs confidence"
Confidence overwhelmed my judgement of my body
I felt like a poison in my body
"I was killing myself"
At least my confidence
Took over "I don't care about society and what they think of me"
F**k insecurities
And love who you were born to be
Love yourself first so somebody else can love you too

© 2014 I am renee


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Exactly, the last two lines completed it all. Only when we love who we are, them other will love us. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am renee

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.
This sounds honestly like lyrics to a motivational rap song. Personally, I am no fan of rap but I do give you the points worth motivation. Shape up a bit. Cursing is a bit distasteful. Instead of using words like s**t to explain the intensity of your feelings, shape your sentences with a bit of a more intense words. Just trial and error, I suppose.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am renee

11 Years Ago

i don't know you but this is my poem, I can curse if I want to plus this isn't even about me thank y.. read more

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i love writing for the enjoyment. im black and white, and i only write about things that come to mind. ive already written a book call the rhythm of poetry. more..