Carousel

It might never happen, I don't know what I want to happen...but something has got to change. It could be for the best, or for the worst, but I don't think someone would repeatedly ride this ride with me if it was all for naught. Enjoy.

Let's break this cycle.
I'm sick of going round and round.
It's time for us to move ahead,
and not go full circle yet again.

I can't stand this carousel
Painted horses over and over in my head
It's time to break its spinning spell
I'll kill myself if I see another one again

Let's break this cycle.
I'm sick of going round and round.
It's time for us to move ahead,
and not go full circle yet again.

Come one now, let's choose another ride
I'm getting tired and nauseous and besides
I can tell that you're also not doing so well
I've never seen a face so green on someone
Who says they're doing so swell

Let's break this cycle.
I'm sick of going round and round.
It's time for us to move ahead,
and not go full circle yet again.

Reviews

[WriterMe]

This has the flow of being lyrics to a song. Is it a song? I loved the flow of the entire thing. The repetitive bits of it were a good touch. Intended obviously. The words were carefully chosen and placed. Great work =]

[A]

I really like this! I could see it being a song. I like your idea of some things in life being a carousel. Great poem and very well writen :)

[NaeNaeContraption]

This is sweet i like the rhythm you got goin in it