My Shadow

Bad feelings today :(

Part of me is a shadow
Its where I hide all my rage
My sadness, my pain 
its trapped in a dark place 
it's where I go in my dreams
The thoughts that I don't care to keep thinking
That's the part of me no one sees
When the sun comes out it runs
Stretching away from me
Yet I feel it watching me
As I hide the Goosebumps behind my smile
Because when the moon rises 
It becomes comes back to me once more
My darkness unseen, unheard and unforgiving

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked how you relate the shadow with the feeling...you put to words with this write...in the first couple of lines is the depression...and the other lines focus the effects...and your end like just seals this verse:

My darkness unseen, unheard and unforgiving