A CYCLIC BORE

Read in descending order, then in ascending order

I am broken
I got cheated by my weakness's poison
that died in a free fall
Like a porcelain doll

Psych!

I am way more
Think about a looping time
A cyclic bore
I am unbroken

Author's Note

I don't get to write as often as I used anymore, so I challenged myself to write a poem that still made sense when read from the ground up.
This is one of two poems I have written this way so far...

Reviews

[Julia.Moore]

A love for haiku poetry developed during world literature studies, inspired by its power to express deep ideas in just a few syllables. The book Blue Harlequin features many of these moments, celebrating the simple beauty of life. Read the full article to explore the essence of haiku poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry/

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Hey, I REALLY liked this! It's playful in construction and meaningful in content. Excellent work king.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice dance of words. I wanted to know and read more my friend. You made the reader need to know more and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[John the Baptist]

The descending version was much more reassuring than the ascending.