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A Poem by Drew

I have stood fists clenched

Against an endless sea of challenge

Where once an insatiable will

Pulsed through my viens

I now grow old and tired

With out stretched hand

Grasping

Empty

I am weak

How much more

I scream out

in a voice unheard

How much more

© 2008 Drew

Author's Note

Ever have one of those days? Help me find a title plz

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♍ Kirstin ♎

This is good but I can't really pick up on what you are talking about, just because of the way you've written it. To me this could have so many different meanings and due to this I'm sorry to say that I have no idea about a title for it. Sorry

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Drew

Las Vegas, NV

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