sanity

i dont know how(or why) i wrote this poem, but i love it. (:

come with me

and step into the other side of sanity

grass grows down 

and a smile is a frown

daytime is dark

water starts a spark

stability is caused by movement

and puzzle pieces just wont fit

the stars in the daytime sky shine so dim

pictures of flowers are so grim

corpses roam the roads

and the heat is so cold

come with me

and step into the other side of sanity

Reviews

[CaitlynYOO(:]

This could be song lyrics.im feelin the beat

[Blessed_Angel]

wow this poem was good. I loved how you used a poem to express a story type thing. I am not sure if that is where you were going but this was very good.

[Aaron Mocks]

This is great. I was very pleasantly surprised when I read this.
Thanks for the smile.

[Valandil93]

I love this poem so much.

[Truth_About_Rain]

Wow, beautiful... I love the way you describe everything ^^

[deeps]

Very nicely written,
Love the rhyme scheme.
Amazing write!

[Hello, Goodbye]

you play with words in a lovely melodic way.. the imagery fits and the streaming lines are easy to absorb.. great work..